小学二年级英语作文:Our house

上下文衔接稍显不流畅；采用了一些简单的从句；作者词汇量偏小，且文章中拼写错误较多。

this beautiful big house is mine. my parents builded it when I borned. we have the hall, tolet, ketchict and big graden in the first floor, and we have bedrooms in the second floor. my grandmather live in the first floor because she is too old to climb up. I love the graden very much, and it has many flowers and a lemon tree.