小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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Our house is in the city centre. It has two floors, and it's the shortest building in the area. My parents builded it when my brother borned out. The old house disigned by my grandfather, and he likes big garden and big windows. Nowaway, the whole family weill always sit under the apply tree and drink a flower tea made by mother if it's weather. My grandfather and grandmother told story about how they lived in the old day and they need their own house desperately. Many years later, I will sit with my children and tell them the story about our house if I still alive.