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It is the common question that we are usually believe our eyes and ears . However, it is bad for us to get wrong decision. We could not consider it whether right or false. Someone mederite we should trust our eyes and ears, while someone will consider it whether right or. Meanwhile, other person will have a doubt about it, even though is right. Everyone has different Hamelete in their head. In my opionon,We should don't get rush decision,because it is very imsmall,we should try as our possible do more thinking.
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