文章组织结构良好;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;采用了一些简单的从句。
in the past, my hometown was surrounded by the forests, the fish lived in the cleanly river. the house was simple and crude ,the roads were crowed as well, people worked hard but earned small. right now my hometown,the tall building is built-up,there are so many cars run on roads. with the development of industry, the envirment become badly. trees and get along with fish to disappear.