2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文章词汇表达不够丰富，在拼写方面也要继续努力。

It is a question that we have money but we couldn't know how use it. Someone will deposite in the bank,someone will buy stock,otherone willestment. It is the important for us to use money so that we could get more behalf. However, we can't always get high behalf. So we should take full money to creat much money. It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. Not only can avoid risk,but also we could get more money. It is important for us to creat much behalf. Meanwhile, we couldn't lose money. We will live in a happy life forever.