题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
With the development of modern technology, computers are becoming more and more popular. We can use it to watch movies, listen to music, read books and communicate with friends. It seems that computer can replace cell phones, books and TV. With computer, we can broaden our horizons and purchase anything we want just by a click of mouse. What is more, computer makes information spread faster and broader. There is no doubt that computer provides us with uncountable convenience, However, every coin has two sides, it is not sensible to depend on computers excessively. For example, children may abandon themselves to computer games and more and more people suffer from money and health trouble on the internet. As far as I am concerned, we should view computers as a useful tool rather than a master.