2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；请注意分段。

Most of the parents take care of everything for children for the moment in society,whatever the children study at school or they already graduate from university so that so many children do not independent.Anywhere,the children can be looking for,so in order to children to be independent,not only rely on their own but also need parents help. There is a problem that why so many parents think they children cannot to be independent person and need them parents help?I think it is the wrong understanding in them mind and they children can do more than them image.If they can change the mind while they are succeeded on the first stage,then the parents should be left them children alone,parents just need to believe them,once and once,if children do it wrong,parents will teach the method until children can do it very well.At last,children to be independent.