采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;文中词汇表达用的较灵活,同时能够较恰当地使用高级词汇。
Psychologist professor Kelly Lam gave a lecture of which subject is known as "The perception of Chinese students about sharing their feeling" at our school last weekend. One of the main content of Dr. Lam is that whatever be delight or be depress, there are a great deal of students show unwillingness to share it with others, the portion of whom accounts for more than 30 percent. Beside, he also addressed that it's our current education that fails to raise up the importance of share among students. Moreover, Dr.Lam suggested that learning to share our feeling with others is of great significance as we live in this epoch. Last but not least, it is also of great benefit to our progressive future.