高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；衔接成分偏少；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

MY HOMETOWN I have been lived in my hometown for a long time.There used to be surrouded by green thees,the river was cleaning with many fishes playing in it .And although our houses were ugly and simple and our streets were narrow,peopleweren't rich, we lived in a happy life! However,with the time passing by ,there have been many new bulidings and the streets are crowded with cars.....industrial development does great harm to the envioronment.What's worse,the fishes have disappeared because a number of trees reduce. In my opionin,government should take measures to protect the environment .It's high time to do it!