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Psychologist professor Kelly Lam gave a lecture of which subject was known as "The perception of Chinese students about sharing their feeling" in our school last weekend. One of the main content of Dr. Lam was that whatever be delight or be depress, there are a great deal of students show unwillingness to share it with others, the portion of whom accounts for more than 30 percent. Besides, he also maintained that it's our current education that fails to raise up the importance of share among students. Moreover, Dr. Lam suggested that learning to share our feeling with others is of great significance as we live in this epoch. Last but not least, it is also of great benefit to our growth in future.