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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:教育 Education

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要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of international students from four areas of the world who came to study at university level in a western country in 2000 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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From the table , we are provided with data in 2000 and 2005, concerning the numbers of international students from China,India,Japan and Brazil who select to study the university level in a western country. As we can see easily from the chart,China has the most international students among the other three countries which is 35000 and 22000 in 2000 and 2005 respectively.What is more,India has 15000 in 2000 and 16000 in 2005,ranking the second place of all the four countries.Japan and Brazil have less international students than China and India. Looking closely,both of China and Japan had a decrease in the numbers of international students but China has a sharply decline during this period. Moreover, Brazil had a significantly rose during the time which is from 2000 to 8000,increasing nearly 66 percet.India had a little change in the numbers throughout this 5 years.

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