2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

从句用的不错，但有几处从句错误；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了。

it's not wise to make decision too quick to think it over. actually many people are easy judge by what they see or what they hear, but we must know that, many things are not what see facially. just like the quite water hide the manytimes what we see and what we hear may be misunderstanding, and make decision at once often hurt ourselves and our friends, families .