雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量。

A great number of chinese people prefer to travel abroad since the traffic ways are more convenient and easier than before. I think the tourism to the other countries has more advantages than disadvantages. First, it is no doubt that travelling abroad can greatly broaden people's view, especially for children. Only in the trip can we learn about the local's culture and customs, which could not be showed fully on the books and Tv programs. We can eat the local delicious food and wear the local famous clothes. Perhaps there is about 10-days trip abroad, but people could gain knowledge in these days. For children, it will be an impressive experience for their growth. Secondly, family bond gets more strength by travelling abroad. because of the old's limited foreign language, the young members of the family can help their parents or relatives to communicate with the local person. Each person can share feelings with the members of family when they are seeing attractive spot in the foreign countries. It is very necessary for people who are busy with their work all day. Trabelling abroad together are valuable not only for the people's health but also for the family relationship. There are two disadvantages to travel to the other countries. First, it will take the tourists long time on travelling abroad. In modern society, people must face living pressure, and they have difficulty in having a great deal of time off from work. Secondly , for most of people, especially the older, the foreign language will become a barrier. They only depend on the tour guide or someone who are good at the foreign language to communicate with the foreigners. In my view, travelling abroad is becoming a trend for chinese people, which can relieve the working people and broaden people's view.