小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；文中拼写错误比较多，用词也稍显贫乏。

i have a friend,she name is weiwei ,she is very nice,i ilke very much play with she,she have beautiful eyes,and have a big nose,have sexy mouth,she lives in shangrao,she is a middle school student,she is very like shopping ,on weekday,we alway go shopping,i think that is very carzy,but i like the feel with her,i like her very much.