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There are a hottest discussion weather we should canceal the spring festival evening party of CCTV. Different people hold vary opinions. Some people hold the view that we should keep on hold the evening party. Because the spring festival is the most important festival for each chinese. Therefore, It is a good way for us to celebrate the spring festival if we can hold a noisy and funny spring festival evening party. According to the CCTV both the chinese in home and chinese oversea can enjoy the happiness of spring festival together.But the other people hold the opposite view that we should canceal the spring festival. With the improvement of living standards, most of chinese family would like to travel outside,as a result of many people can not allocate their time to watch the evening party. In my opinion we had better hold the spring festival evening party in order that we can herit the excellent culture tradition.In addition, the culture sector should take some effective measures to attract the attention toward the evening party , especially the youngsters.In addition, the CCTV shoud improve the form of evening party and enhance the funny charateristic.
