高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In the past ten years, my hometown has changed so rapidly. In the past, the town was surrounded by plenty of trees and flowers. Fishes liked to swim in the clean rivers. People lived in small house and the streets are narrow. People worked very hard but led a simple life. And nowadays, people are becoming richer and richer. We can see skycrapers everywhere. The street is crowded with all kinds of cars. The enviroment of our town has been destroyed by the developed industry. There are fewer trees and fishes. We should pay more attention to solve the problem of polution.