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高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:15浏览次数:11037
要求:
假如你是一位足球爱好者,请你根据下列要点提示,以“My favorite sport”为题写一篇110词左右的短文。
1 踢足球是你的最大爱好;
2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球;在回家路上捡到一个足球,然后就和朋友们一起玩,从此深深地爱上了踢球;
3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛;
4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆;最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。
参考词汇: 偶然 by chance 职业运动员 a professional football player
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可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足。

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My favorite sport Everyone has his or her favorite sport, so do I. Now I want to introduce to you my favorite sport, that is football. I like playing football so deeply for an unforgettable story which happened by accident. One day when I was on my way home, I picked up a football lying on the road nearby a playground, since then I have often gone with my friends to play football and I have fallen in love playing football. Now I always hang out with my friends to do the football training and we usually got some chances to participate in the football game. Like many other people, I have my own football star named Beckham, who is known for his excerllent skills in playing football. And I hope one day I can be a football player just like Beckham!

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