Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者词汇表达的灵活性要加强,且注意拼写错误。
Nowadays,more and more people is addited to internet.Whatever they do without them.In my opinion,I think disadvantage is bigger than advantage.My thought as bellows. Firstly,electronic communication is conveninece,you can be easily to send massige or make crash with someone.However,it will make you less words when face-to-face.Secondly,face-to-face is more comfertable than electronic communication.finally,