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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10410
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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Every coins have a two-side.Putting all your eggs in one basket,likely,have both advantages and disadvantages.Yet,in my opinion,the disadvantages of putting your eggs in one basket far beyond its advantages.Thus,it is never careful to always have plan B when we are copying with some important events. Nobody can predict what is going to happen in the future.When unexpected accidents happened,you would find yourself in a desperate situation,losing everything you have.Putting all of you have in one thing equal to putting all the risks and pressures together.That’s why we need to think about all the possible risks and preparing extra plans before we make decisions on important events.In other words,we must have different plans and preparations in case of undesirable results. In conclusion,it is unadvisable to put all eggs in only one basket.That’s because this may give rise to unaffordable and unexpected consequences which might make you disappointed and annoyed.Therefore,I assert that we should have alternative choices to assure everything goes well.

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