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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
简单句偏多，应增加从句使用；作者词汇量比较丰富，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活，但要避免出现拼写错误；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织。
Dear Sir/Madam, When I attended the exhibition from Dec.15 to Dec.22 in New York, I leanrt your new product,I am very interested in it.I think your new product will be very popular in China,so there ia a huge potential demand. Could you send me the price list and catalogue about the new prodect? Hope to establish business relationship with your firm soon. Your pompt reply will be kindly appreciated! Thanks for your cooperation, Your sincerely Hubing
