2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇积累很好，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力；多多加强从句和复杂句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

I'm so glad to hear you can visit my hometown.Acctualy my home have many intereting things.i hope you can go through them with me.Now,let me gove you a introduction for my hometown. first,there hve many historical culture,it's our the development of human beings.at there,you can good kown chinse.second,the delicious food is neseccery.there have all kinds of snakes.you should have a large appciate to eat as many as you can.thirdly,you also can