文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;多多加强从句和复杂句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
I'm so glad to hear you can visit my hometown.Actually my home has many interesting things.I hope you can go through them with me.Now,let me gave you introduction to my hometown. first,there hve many historical culture,it's our the development of human beings.at there,you can good kown chinse.second,the delicious food is neseccery.there have all kinds of snakes.you should have a large appciate to eat as many as you can.thirdly,you also can