2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I'm so glad to hear you can visit my hometown.Actually my home has many interesting things.I hope you can go through them with me. Now,let me gave you introduction . first,there has richness culture,it's our the development of human beings.there,you can have a good kownleage of chinse.second,the delicious food is neseccery.there have all kinds of snakes.you should have a large appciate to eat as many as you can.thirdly,you also can