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I'm so glad to hear you can visit my hometown.Actually my home has many interesting things.I hope you can go through them with me. Now,let me gave you introduction. first,there has richness culture,it's our the development of human beings. There,you can have a good knowledge of chinse.second,the delicious food is neseccery.there have all kinds of snakes.you should have a large appciate to eat as many as you can.thirdly,you also can