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I'm so glad to hear you can visit my hometown. Actually my home has many interesting things. I hope you can go through them with me. Now,let me gave you introduction. first, there has richness culture,it's our the development of human beings. There, you can have a good knowledge of chinse. second, the delicious food is neseccery. there have all kinds of snakes.you should have a large appciate to eat as many as you can.thirdly,you also can
