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I'm so glad to hear you can visit my hometown. Actually my home has many interesting things. I hope you can go through them with me. Now,let me gave you introduction about my hometown. First, there has bountiful culture,it's about the development of our human beings. There, you can have a good knowledge of chinse. Second, the delicious food is necessary. There have all kinds snakes.You should have a large appciate to eat as many as you can. Thirdly,you can also