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I'm so glad to hear you can visit my hometown. Actually my home has many interesting things. I hope you can go through them with me. Now,let me gave you introduction about my hometown. First, there were bountiful culture and it's about the development of our human beings. There, you can have a good knowledge of chinse. Second, the delicious food is necessary. There have all kinds of snakes.You should have a large appetite to eat as many as you can. Thirdly,you can also