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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71657[网页划词已开启]
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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I'm so glad to hear you can visit my hometown. Actually my home has many interesting things. I hope you can go through them with me. Now,let me gave you introduction about my hometown. First, there were bountiful culture and about the development of our human beings. There, you can have a good knowledge of chinse. Second, the delicious food is necessary. There have all kinds of snakes.You should have a large appetite to eat as many as you can. Thirdly,you can also

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