小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

If you go to my office , you can find that there is a picture on my table. Yes, you are right , it seems so warm that you should think it is my family. There are five peoples in our family. Do you find the man whose head looks like a potato? He is my father and his is a worker. Every morning he gets up early and prepare the breakfast for us. He is a funny and honest man,we all love him! Oh, that beautiful lady is my mother and she is a chinese teacher. She gets up as early as my father every morning. Firstly , she need to wash a familly's clothes. Secondly , she need to clear the floor.Thirdly, she read the newspaper. "It's time to go to work, honey" My father always remember her.