小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

If you go to my office, you can find that there is a picture on my table. Yes, you are right; it seems so warm that you should think it is my family. There are five peoples in our family. Do you find the man whose head looks like a potato? He is my father and his is a worker. Every morning he gets up early and prepares the breakfast for us. He is a funny and honest man, we all love him! Oh, that beautiful lady is my mother and she is a Chinese teacher. She gets up as early as my father every morning. Firstly, she needs to wash a family’s clothes. Secondly, she need to clear the floor. Thirdly, she read the newspaper. "It's time to go to work, honey" My father always remembers her.