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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3586
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

用户的作文(系统评分56.0分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可增加从句和复杂句的使用;文章用词过于单一,还要加强拼写检查。

用户练习作文:

The proportion of the different kinds of fast food that teenagers prefer to eat in America is showed in the pie chart. There are 33% of the teenagers like to have hamburgers and occupate more units than other genres,the least part is Sushi,just take up 3% of the whole,and the second food that is more than others is Pizza in 26%. The French Fries is 22% trippled the Fried Chicken that take up 9%,and the Tacos is 7% similar to the Fried Chicken. There are more kids like to eat PIzza and Hamburgers and French Fries,all of them take up almost the chart,and less teenagers are favour of Tacos ,Sushi and FRIED CHICHEN.

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