文章组织结构良好;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中词汇表达丰富度不足,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。
The place I would like to take my foreign friend to see is the Forbidden city. In my view, the Forbidden city is the only place that can represent China. It is great and solemn. The architectural structure of the Forbidden city shows a high power of royal in ancient China. I can express the history and culture of china to my friend through the process of visiting the forbidden city. I am sure that they will be attracted by the beautiful and magnificant palace buildings. Maybe some people think that the forbidden city can not show the development of modern China. In fact, we should know that it is the history created the present. The Forbidden city is a great combination of the past and now. When we get there, we can realize that here is China.