2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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The place I would like to take my foreign friend to see is the Forbidden city. In my view, the Forbidden city is the only place that can represent China. It is great and solemn. The architectural structure of the Forbidden city shows a high power of emperor in ancient China. I can express the history and culture of China to my friend through the process of visiting the forbidden city. I am sure that they will be attracted by the beautiful and magnificent palace buildings. Maybe some people think that the forbidden city can not show the development of modern China. We should know that it is the past which makes the present. The Forbidden city is a great combination of the past and now. When we get there, we can realize that here is China.