2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

全文结构较为严谨；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。

With the sociaty devoloped rapidly,it is very convenient for us to do something. Such as computer,which enriches our life and makes our work get easy. Since someone considers it that is a amazing invention. However, other people insist on computer is more bad than belifity. It is terrific invention for us to make teeneger to b attracted so they spend more time on computer. Lots of parents persist in rejecting children using computer. In my viewopint,although there is some drawback for us,we should choose right way to use it. If children always play computer games, they will lost themselves. Menwhile,it will cause terrific influence to their family. In a word, we should take a right method to use computer so that we can get more belifity than bad. Sometimes, we could use computer to play games. It is very important for us to rightly use it.