2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；全文结构较为严谨。

With the society developed rapidly, it is very convenient for us to do something. Such as computer,which enriches our life and makes our work get easy. Since someone considers it that is an amazing invention. However, other person insist on computer are more bad than benefit. It is a terrific invention for us to make teenager to b attracted so they spend more time on computer. Lots of parents persist in rejecting children using computer. In my viewopoint,although there is some drawbacks for us, we should choose a right way to use it. If children always play computer games, they will lose themselves. Meanwhile, it will take a terrific influence to their family. In a word, we should take a right method to use computer so that we can get more benefit than bad. Sometimes, we could use computer to play games. It is very important for us to rightly use it.