2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误；文中从句的使用偏少。

There are old saying"Traveling thousands of miles is better than reading thousands of books!".china is a traveling coutry .my hometown is meishan city where is in sichuan province .there are many famous person.like as the greater poet sudongpo and the litterateur limi.the sansu temple is horned for the family of sansu.