2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

If one of my foreign friend come to my home town,the most beautiful place that i want to take her to visite is Qijiang river.Yes,it's known as the coll and blue water it has. As far as i am concerned,our foreign friend more willing to know about the place around us.That's the reason why i take he to QiJiang river which is nearby my house.