文章衔接手法恰当;能够使用一些不错的从句;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
It is not sensible that you see it and listen to it,getting a conlusions at once. In reality society,most of people have the same things,for example,they like to see what and say what,they are not thinking what the reality of the thing,they are only knowing what they should say. In my views,the views is not right,Seeing is more than a must, the ear is not necessarily false.at most of time,we should use our heart,only in this way can we find a better lifestyle.Therefore,we can live a happy life. Sometimes,we need to increase own skills,we can recognise the society reality.we could be misleaded by some uncerntain factors.we should not completely relay on others,we should have a right way to distingwish our directions.
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