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It is not sensible that you see it and listen to it,getting a conlusions at once. In reality society,most of people have the same things,for example,they like to see what and say what,they are not thinking what the reality of the thing,they are only knowing what they should say. In my views,the views is not right,Seeing is more than a must, the ear is not necessarily false.at most of time,we should use our heart,only in this way can we find a better lifestyle.Therefore,we can live a happy life. Sometimes,we need to increase own skills,we can recognise the society reality.we could be misleaded by some uncertain factors.we should not completely relay on others,we should have a right way to distinguish our directions.
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