文章衔接手法恰当;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用。
It is not sensible that you see it and listen to it,getting a conclusion at once. In reality society, most of people have the same things, for example, they like to see what and say what, they are not thinking what the reality of the thing, they are only knowing what they should say. In my views, the views is not right. Seeing is more than a must, the ear is not necessarily false. At most of time, we should use our heart, only in this way can we find a better lifestyle. Therefore, we can live a happy life. Sometimes,we need to increase own skills,we can recognise the society reality.we could be misleaded by some uncertain factors.we should not completely relay on others,we should have a right way to distinguish our directions.
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