文章衔接手法恰当;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。
It is not sensible that you see it and listen to it,getting a conclusion at once. In reality society, most of people have the same things, for example, they like to see what and say what, they are not thinking what the reality of the thing, they are only knowing what they should say. In my views, the views are not right. Seeing is more than a must, the ear is not necessarily false. At most of time, we should use our hearts, only in this way can we find a better lifestyle. Therefore, we can live a happy life. Sometimes, we need to increase own skills, we can recognise the social reality. We could be mislead by some uncertain factors, we should not completely relay on others and we should have a right way to distinguish our directions.
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