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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9026
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文章组织结构良好;若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

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Life is a short thing and we are always catch up the precious time to spend our life well.But our abilities are limited,thus it's very hard to make our life more meaningful.However,we can try our best to struggle,to fight with different kinds of challenges.Maybe,we can make our life enough joyful. The attitude that people treat time is different.Someone think life is short,so we should enjoy our immediate pleasures.They are just indulged in wasting their time and that is not a right attitude to face our life.One man can do more than he can image.It can be denied that human willpower is a powerful force.It gives us stength to make impossible to be possible.That's the reason human always can create stunning things which are beyonged our limited abilities. In a word,never give in your weakness,you can do better to live your life.

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