高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

结构良好，但是语言不流畅；文中从句数量过少；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查。

It' s been a long time to visit my hometown. I remembered there was homey and lovely with green green grass,the river was clean with some fishes,and there was pool and simple. But now, there was a great change in my hometown. The buildings replaced the small house. And there were a great number of woking factories, and cars were chasing in the street. Peace was gone. The enviorment is worse and worse. The tree is cut and the fishes are disapair. They don't realize one important point: The urgent stuff is protect enviorment.