2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

作者词汇表达比较灵活多变，尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章层次较为清晰。

From the bar chart above we can find that life expectancy has increased 50 percent from 1960 to 1990. In the same time, infant mortality has decreased 50 percent. All of the data indicate that living environment and healthcare technology has a great advance and people can live healthier and longer. In 1960, people suffered by many diseases, germs and parasites always affect many fatal illness. Many of babies died caused difficult birth or newborns complication at that time. Nowadays, people has been injected some vaccines to prevent germs and parasites since we were born. Modern medical equipment helps us to known baby situation even they still grow inside their mother. The sanitation is better and better, more and more elder people increasingly focus on health protection. All these are signal that our technology improves faster and brings us a good life. Meanwhile, the aging of population occur many new problems are waiting us to deal with.