高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少；文中句子偏简单，可增加从句使用量。

I used to live in a ranquil village. There are several brooks all around it. In my childhood, little partner and I built sand castles and splashed in the water in summer.Plenty of trees and flowers beside the village. It is a beauty spot nearby. People came to see our village and visited the woods with their family on weekends. Recently, many farmlands were sold by the goverment. Now our hometown has built tall buildings and factories everywhere. Fresh air turned badly, the brooks were polluted. There are no fish, no flowers. Things becoming more and more serious.People had never came to see our hometown to play.