题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足。
Nowadays, a lot of people,whether children or adults, find themselves lonely and somewhat impersonal. Living in a massive tower block, you probably don't know your neighbors’ name, though you share the same lift with him at the same time every morning. Why? Because you never talked with him, neither did him. Walking along the street, you can see people blunder round in this big city with their poker-face, or gaze at their phone. It seems like people only care about their own benefits and business, while turning a deaf ear to the others’. Reports say many people must find some witnesses before they help the older, for they are afraid of getting into trouble.