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There are two different attitudes towards the situation of the evironment problem among people as some think that human can not solve it and others against them.For me,i suppose that if we can take some action ,we can change the phenomenon. In some people's opinion,they believe that taking measures now is too late to retrieve the circumstance,because the problem we are faced with is serious and once we make bad impacts on the evironment.We can't get them recover from the destruction for the reason that human have limit ability.Nowadays,as more as more plants and animal species have been changed genes,we can't alter them easily.Plus the fact that those animals breed the generations out of control,and they're simple to be spreaded outside.As we can know, even if we can be in charge of the plants and animal species in the area that we can find, we still can't absolutely solve the problem. As opposed to their perpective,i convince that human-race can implement and transform this situation.First,we should stop taking the plants and animals from other place,because if we bring into our area,those would invander the whole creature world in our region.Second,we should try our best to make less pollution especially the chemicals that is bad for not only us but also the surroundings.Third,we can improve our technology,and drag the plants and animal species in normal track,for example,we can change the genes that has been changed badly before,and then spread the excellent genes by pollen.Last but not least, appealing the whole world to take actions and drawing their attention are very important to make us go out of the delimma. Above all, i think we can alter the situation by technological improvement and we everyone's effort.
