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2005年12月24日英语四级作文真题:名校校园旅游

发布时间:2013-05-17 00:27浏览次数:5953
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below :   
1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点    
2.校园是否应对游客开放,人们看法不同    
3.我认为……
用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。

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Nowadays, more and more people are willing to go to visit the universities, the universities is becoming popular travel pots. However, should the university campus be open to tourists? For the problem, different people hold different points. Some people think the universities are the place for studying instead of for playing, besides, too many tourists will affect the studying life. On the contrary, other people hold the opinion that the university should open to the society, which can show the school culture to more people, and raise the reputation of the school . As far as I am concerned, I support the second view. Because many universities are extremely beautiful, and there is no doubt that they are worthwhile to visit. And it is sure that the universities are equal to everybody, so not only students but also other people can visit

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