语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。
Nowadays, more and more people are willing to go to visit the universities, the universities is becoming popular travel pots. However, should the university campus be open to tourists? For the problem, different people hold different points. Some people think the universities are the place for studying instead of for playing, besides, too many tourists will affect the studying life. On the contrary, other people hold the opinion that the university should open to the society, which can show the school culture to more people, and raise the reputation of the school . As far as I am concerned, I support the second view. Because many universities are extremely beautiful, and there is no doubt that they are worthwhile to visit. And it is sure that the universities are equal to everybody, so not only students but also other people can visit
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