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文中较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇量仍需积累;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Deer Sir or Madam, On the grounds of comtributing to Project Hope, I strongly determined to find a suitable juvenile to help with. At first, positive attitude to life, good social character,and so on, is a fundamental factors to be elected. The second, the child is at least 18 years old so that he is big enough to make a decision if accept the financial aid. Last but not least, the young should be thirsty for learning even though his poor domestic income. How can I help the child? you maybe asked. On the one hand, I will offer the child the tuition of every semester while he is going to school. If you find this child, please transform the all informations of the candicate to me as soon as possible. I will appropriate you sincerely. Thank you so much. your faithfully, Li Ming