字数:200满分:100分
作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Deer Sir or Madam, On the grounds of comtributing to Project Hope, I strongly determined to look to a suitable juvenile to help with. At first, positive attitude to life, good human character,and so on, is a fundamental factors to be elected. The second, the child is at least 18 years old so that he is big enough to make a decision if accept the financial aid. Last but not least, the youngster should be thirsty for learning even though his poor domestic income. How can I help the child? you maybe asked. On the one hand, I will offer the child the tuition of every semester while he is going to school. If you get a such child, please transform all the information of the candidate to me as soon as possible. I will appropriate you sincerely. Thank you so much. Yours faithfully, Li Ming